Trapped

In this picture, you were attempting to express the feeling of being trapped. This was perfectly depicted in this photo.

However, the focus of the camera was on the left leg of your subject, not the subject herself. The focal was left to be put on the leg, so this drops the value of impact. The subject was not given much clarity.

Despite this, the fact that you tried adding a vanishing point is commendable.

Another point to look is the use of props. It could have been distributed evenly especially to the actual background. If it is to be depicting desolation, the background could have use a bit more of the props to give a more intense feeling.

It is almost great, if not for the flaws mentioned above.

I hope I have helped you.

~ Ruby